no no, never give up ! we're all here or you !! providing a feedback which will help you improve.wagtunes wrote: ↑Sat Jan 04, 2020 3:54 amThis is my catching lightning in a bottle. Don't expect all my stuff to sound this good. But then again, who knows? I'm venturing into uncharted territory here. If you heard the original version of this, one that just a few months ago I would have kept, it was awful.Bansaw wrote: ↑Sat Jan 04, 2020 3:35 am This is really good. Jeff Lynne is the most underrated songwriter of the 70s/80s . I love a lot of ELO stuff.
Production is better than normal, especially the drums.
Enjoyed the lyrics again. Could this be my favourite wags track. Very probably.
@3:13 great.
This is high quality song writing. A number of professional bands in the 70s might have released this song, and with production and vocals, it would have done well in the charts.
Something got switched on in my brain thanks to Jon and I can't turn it off. I could never produce a song the way I used to ever again. As a result, my days of writing a song a day are over. This shit takes a ton of time to do right.
And again, I'm still not 100% happy with it. But as a demo, yeah, maybe 45 years ago this could have been a hit.
Maybe in my next life.
"What a Wonderful World" was a no' 1 hit for Louis Armstrong when he was 66.