The Wagtunes Corner
- KVRAF
- 6325 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
I listened to "Crimes of The Heart." Great song! Wonderful melody and ELO-ish vocoders. Cool guitar.
I think the bass and drums are adequate but not as strong as the rest of the elements in the track.
I think the bass and drums are adequate but not as strong as the rest of the elements in the track.
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Yeah, I compressed the hell out of both and brought them back in the mix. I'm doing some experimenting with my mixes now instead of playing it safe and just doing the same old thing all the time. Expect more experimentation in the future.
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- addled muppet weed
- 105875 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
well, i can certainly here the queen and sparks influences in therewagtunes wrote: ↑Sun Sep 22, 2019 8:51 pm 2nd track from my upcoming CD "Queen For A Day"
Queen meets Sparks.
Duck Soup
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim/duck-soup
catchy as ever (pretty much know im gonna be "in the soup in the soup in the soup we go..." as i try to sleep later, so thanks )
nice clear mix too, i know ive said it before but you have improved so much in the past few years, you should pat yourself on the back.
and to top it all, it sounded like you where enjoying singing it, which is the main thing, we have fun while were doing it if we end up with a nice track at the end, double bonus
no complaints from me
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Sparks was one of my favorite bands growing up in the mid 70s. I remember hearing "Achoo" the day of my high school graduation in 1975. I bought all their albums shortly after.vurt wrote: ↑Mon Sep 23, 2019 6:20 pmwell, i can certainly here the queen and sparks influences in therewagtunes wrote: ↑Sun Sep 22, 2019 8:51 pm 2nd track from my upcoming CD "Queen For A Day"
Queen meets Sparks.
Duck Soup
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim/duck-soup
catchy as ever (pretty much know im gonna be "in the soup in the soup in the soup we go..." as i try to sleep later, so thanks )
nice clear mix too, i know ive said it before but you have improved so much in the past few years, you should pat yourself on the back.
and to top it all, it sounded like you where enjoying singing it, which is the main thing, we have fun while were doing it if we end up with a nice track at the end, double bonus
no complaints from me
In short, I could do Beatles, Queen, ELO and Sparks styled tunes every single day and never get tired of doing them.
Sorry about interfering with your sleep though.
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
3rd track from my upcoming CD "Queen For A Day"
Wrecking Ball
You keep me hanging
Up on the wall
Very slow torture
Waiting to fall
You are pure evil
Sent here from hell
Spawn of the devil
My poisoned well
You are my wrecking ball
You are my wrecking ball
You are my, my wrecking ball
Eat out my heart now
That's what you do
Worms in my stomach
Remind me of you
Rot in the attic
Home falls apart
Pain in my gut throbs
Knife through the heart
Repeat Chorus
Someday I'll kill you
And you'll be dead
Then I can go on
Living instead
Until that day girl
Wishing you death
I won't forgive you
Til my dying breath
Repeat Chorus
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim/wrecking-ball
Wrecking Ball
You keep me hanging
Up on the wall
Very slow torture
Waiting to fall
You are pure evil
Sent here from hell
Spawn of the devil
My poisoned well
You are my wrecking ball
You are my wrecking ball
You are my, my wrecking ball
Eat out my heart now
That's what you do
Worms in my stomach
Remind me of you
Rot in the attic
Home falls apart
Pain in my gut throbs
Knife through the heart
Repeat Chorus
Someday I'll kill you
And you'll be dead
Then I can go on
Living instead
Until that day girl
Wishing you death
I won't forgive you
Til my dying breath
Repeat Chorus
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim/wrecking-ball
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- addled muppet weed
- 105875 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
4th track from my upcoming CD "Queen For A Day"
Drag Racing
Put your shoes on
Pretense all gone
No one left here to fool
Be yourself now
You should know how
Either way you're still cool
People they will accept you
If you reach for a star
Never forget
Who you really are
Drag racing like a killer queen
Fast or slow or in between
Drag racing in your high heel shoes
Tall or short win or lose
Be yourself
Be the thing
Grab a mic
And start to sing
Be a queen or be a king
If you don't your life don't mean a thing
Drag racing just like hanging on a wing
Take control now
I'll show you how
In the palm of your hand
Be the hero
Not a zero
Time that you took a stand
Repeat Pre Chorus and Chorus
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim/drag-racing
Drag Racing
Put your shoes on
Pretense all gone
No one left here to fool
Be yourself now
You should know how
Either way you're still cool
People they will accept you
If you reach for a star
Never forget
Who you really are
Drag racing like a killer queen
Fast or slow or in between
Drag racing in your high heel shoes
Tall or short win or lose
Be yourself
Be the thing
Grab a mic
And start to sing
Be a queen or be a king
If you don't your life don't mean a thing
Drag racing just like hanging on a wing
Take control now
I'll show you how
In the palm of your hand
Be the hero
Not a zero
Time that you took a stand
Repeat Pre Chorus and Chorus
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim/drag-racing
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aaron aardvark aaron aardvark https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=248508
- KVRAF
- 2667 posts since 22 Jan, 2011 from near Los Angeles
wagtunes,
Thank you for the reviews! Now "Sweet Patootie": is that sampled electric bass? It sounds very good. The brass & sax sounds are very good also! So is the piano. The melodies are nice. Nice song!
Thank you for the reviews! Now "Sweet Patootie": is that sampled electric bass? It sounds very good. The brass & sax sounds are very good also! So is the piano. The melodies are nice. Nice song!
You can hear my original music at this link: https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... dID=224436
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aaron aardvark aaron aardvark https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=248508
- KVRAF
- 2667 posts since 22 Jan, 2011 from near Los Angeles
wagtunes,
Thank you for the reviews! Now your 'Cool Cat' song: unusual time signatures at times. Sax, brass, strings, and piano sounds are high quality! Around ~2:00 is my favorite portion of the song. Nice melodies. This sounded good, though overall, I liked "Sweet Patootie" better. Cheers!
Thank you for the reviews! Now your 'Cool Cat' song: unusual time signatures at times. Sax, brass, strings, and piano sounds are high quality! Around ~2:00 is my favorite portion of the song. Nice melodies. This sounded good, though overall, I liked "Sweet Patootie" better. Cheers!
You can hear my original music at this link: https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... dID=224436
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Thanks for the listen and the feedback Aaron. Always appreciated. The electric bass is MODO Bass which is a modeled bass. It's the only electric bass I use anymore. The brass and sax are from Warp IV which, IMO, are the best out there. Really made the whole CD.
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
5th track from my upcoming CD "Queen For A Day"
Bleeding On The Dance Floor
And so it goes
It's funny like no one knows
Could not see it come
Never thought that you would run
I tried to be strong
But I realized that I was wrong
You weren't the one
Now the damage has been done
Bleeding on the dance floor
Waltzing with you
Holding my heart in my hands
Nursing this wound is the best I can do
Watching fate blow up our plans
Bleeding on the dance floor
Dying inside
As you walk off with my dreams
Yeah I can run but I sure cannot hide
Nothing in life's as it seems
There were the signs
But I didn't pay no mind
Oblivious me
To think I could not see
Musical cues
Guess I had to pay my dues
Our two step it ends
We don't even part as friends
Repeat Chorus
And so I say
Goodbye to what I knew
Had to end this way
Nothing else that I can do
Repeat Chorus
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim ... ance-floor
Bleeding On The Dance Floor
And so it goes
It's funny like no one knows
Could not see it come
Never thought that you would run
I tried to be strong
But I realized that I was wrong
You weren't the one
Now the damage has been done
Bleeding on the dance floor
Waltzing with you
Holding my heart in my hands
Nursing this wound is the best I can do
Watching fate blow up our plans
Bleeding on the dance floor
Dying inside
As you walk off with my dreams
Yeah I can run but I sure cannot hide
Nothing in life's as it seems
There were the signs
But I didn't pay no mind
Oblivious me
To think I could not see
Musical cues
Guess I had to pay my dues
Our two step it ends
We don't even part as friends
Repeat Chorus
And so I say
Goodbye to what I knew
Had to end this way
Nothing else that I can do
Repeat Chorus
https://soundcloud.com/steven-wagenheim ... ance-floor
- KVRian
- 1172 posts since 25 Jan, 2017
Good work. This is the first track of yours where I happen to hear a "clear" voice.
I don't know which fx-chain you sent your vocals through prior to this, but I'm pretty sure you shouldn't look back.
I don't know which fx-chain you sent your vocals through prior to this, but I'm pretty sure you shouldn't look back.
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
If you're referring to the last track, there is very little processing on the vocals. EQ, Compressor, Gate, Deesser, Limiter and a send out to a very small plate reverb.
They key, however, was a lot of Variaudio to correct all the pitch problems. That's where the real magic happens.
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- KVRAF
- 15135 posts since 7 Sep, 2008
Love the Drag Racing song title. Perfect for a Queen inspired track.
Re the song itself: sounds like Queen to me so great job
Re the song itself: sounds like Queen to me so great job
"I was wondering if you'd like to try Magic Mushrooms"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Thanks for the listen and the feedback. Much appreciated.Mushy Mushy wrote: ↑Sun Sep 29, 2019 10:10 am Love the Drag Racing song title. Perfect for a Queen inspired track.
Re the song itself: sounds like Queen to me so great job