[Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - High Above
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 163 posts since 22 Oct, 2016
New track that I'm working on. Not quite sure if the intro fits or how to end the song.
Edit: Added 2nd revision
https://soundcloud.com/kyrptomusic/high ... -2/s-NOJGA
Revised:
https://soundcloud.com/kyrptomusic/high ... ed/s-swdYg
WIP:
https://soundcloud.com/kyrptomusic/high ... -1/s-DdW98
Any advice is much appreciated.
Thanks!
Edit: Added 2nd revision
https://soundcloud.com/kyrptomusic/high ... -2/s-NOJGA
Revised:
https://soundcloud.com/kyrptomusic/high ... ed/s-swdYg
WIP:
https://soundcloud.com/kyrptomusic/high ... -1/s-DdW98
Any advice is much appreciated.
Thanks!
Last edited by Kyrpto on Wed Nov 01, 2017 6:25 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 163 posts since 22 Oct, 2016
Just added a revised version with some changes. The mix should sound better now.
- KVRAF
- 11506 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
I've listened to both versions. I prefer the revised version except for the first minute or so. I think the bass is slightly better defined during the opening minute on the original. It's a close call. When the bass changes to the longer, more sustained notes, I think the revised version wins.
Good work
Good work
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 163 posts since 22 Oct, 2016
Thanks! I'll definitely make those changes right away.seismic1 wrote:I've listened to both versions. I prefer the revised version except for the first minute or so. I think the bass is slightly better defined during the opening minute on the original. It's a close call. When the bass changes to the longer, more sustained notes, I think the revised version wins.
Good work
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
this comment is for the wip version:
nice clean mix at the start on here. it reminds me of early naked eyes.
love the bass at 1:34. great evolution.
then, however from about 2:21 to 3:09 i think the arped Epiano
sound comes over a bit "strained" to my ears.
Other than that enjoyed
that said, revised version is favored
nice clean mix at the start on here. it reminds me of early naked eyes.
love the bass at 1:34. great evolution.
then, however from about 2:21 to 3:09 i think the arped Epiano
sound comes over a bit "strained" to my ears.
Other than that enjoyed
that said, revised version is favored
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 163 posts since 22 Oct, 2016
Thanks! By straining do you mean it's too bright or loud?layzer wrote:this comment is for the wip version:
nice clean mix at the start on here. it reminds me of early naked eyes.
love the bass at 1:34. great evolution.
then, however from about 2:21 to 3:09 i think the arped Epiano
sound comes over a bit "strained" to my ears.
Other than that enjoyed
that said, revised version is favored
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
not sure, it just sounds distorted and over limited?Kyrpto wrote:Thanks! By straining do you mean it's too bright or loud?layzer wrote:this comment is for the wip version:
nice clean mix at the start on here. it reminds me of early naked eyes.
love the bass at 1:34. great evolution.
then, however from about 2:21 to 3:09 i think the arped Epiano
sound comes over a bit "strained" to my ears.
Other than that enjoyed
that said, revised version is favored
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 163 posts since 22 Oct, 2016
I don't have a limiter on it but I do have an exciter. Is it the high frequencies that are straining?layzer wrote:not sure, it just sounds distorted and over limited?Kyrpto wrote:Thanks! By straining do you mean it's too bright or loud?layzer wrote:this comment is for the wip version:
nice clean mix at the start on here. it reminds me of early naked eyes.
love the bass at 1:34. great evolution.
then, however from about 2:21 to 3:09 i think the arped Epiano
sound comes over a bit "strained" to my ears.
Other than that enjoyed
that said, revised version is favored
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
listening again. narrowing it down to 2:53 - 3:09 is where i hear it most. i cant explain itKyrpto wrote:I don't have a limiter on it but I do have an exciter. Is it the high frequencies that are straining?layzer wrote:not sure, it just sounds distorted and over limited?Kyrpto wrote:Thanks! By straining do you mean it's too bright or loud?layzer wrote:this comment is for the wip version:
nice clean mix at the start on here. it reminds me of early naked eyes.
love the bass at 1:34. great evolution.
then, however from about 2:21 to 3:09 i think the arped Epiano
sound comes over a bit "strained" to my ears.
Other than that enjoyed
that said, revised version is favored
more than it just doesn't sound clear in the mix. it might even be several
sounds all going on at once squashed together muddying it up. I'd cut back
compression and drop the level on some of the other sounds to give it more
breathing room.
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 163 posts since 22 Oct, 2016
I added a second revision. Tried to narrow down what the problem was. Hopefully this one fixed the muddiness problem.layzer wrote:listening again. narrowing it down to 2:53 - 3:09 is where i hear it most. i cant explain itKyrpto wrote:I don't have a limiter on it but I do have an exciter. Is it the high frequencies that are straining?layzer wrote:not sure, it just sounds distorted and over limited?Kyrpto wrote:Thanks! By straining do you mean it's too bright or loud?layzer wrote:this comment is for the wip version:
nice clean mix at the start on here. it reminds me of early naked eyes.
love the bass at 1:34. great evolution.
then, however from about 2:21 to 3:09 i think the arped Epiano
sound comes over a bit "strained" to my ears.
Other than that enjoyed
that said, revised version is favored
more than it just doesn't sound clear in the mix. it might even be several
sounds all going on at once squashed together muddying it up. I'd cut back
compression and drop the level on some of the other sounds to give it more
breathing room.