Today I recorded a visual fx video for it (based mostly on a milkdrop visualization).
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eEbaRdfK ... e=youtu.be
Any feedback welcome.
Thanks in advance!
Journey to Hoag's Object
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 838 posts since 7 Jul, 2008 from Lost in the wilderness
Last track I made last year, finished just in the very last moments of the year, and the last one I managed to completely finish since then...
Today I recorded a visual fx video for it (based mostly on a milkdrop visualization).
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eEbaRdfK ... e=youtu.be
Any feedback welcome.
Thanks in advance!
Today I recorded a visual fx video for it (based mostly on a milkdrop visualization).
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eEbaRdfK ... e=youtu.be
Any feedback welcome.
Thanks in advance!
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- KVRist
- 35 posts since 18 Aug, 2011
Hope you can take criticism as you did request feedback /grins
Well, I would have to say that first impression is the production just isn't there. I hear a tape recorded (although it may very well not be) quality song with no real dynamic tone. Is this a demo or a WIP?
I hear no use of EQ.
Composition overall seems to wander due to the guitar sample and how it's being used,very irregular.
Almost like muzak.
Arrangement sounds like something you may have heard in a video game in the late 80's.The song is very dated sounding and has no real definition or prominent tone that sticks out.
Keep working at it man,learn some theory and get a daw (I could be wrong but it "sounds" like you dont have one)
Learn about the use of your daws on board fx. Delays,reverbs,compression,EQ.
Your mix will stand out alot more.
Well, I would have to say that first impression is the production just isn't there. I hear a tape recorded (although it may very well not be) quality song with no real dynamic tone. Is this a demo or a WIP?
I hear no use of EQ.
Composition overall seems to wander due to the guitar sample and how it's being used,very irregular.
Almost like muzak.
Arrangement sounds like something you may have heard in a video game in the late 80's.The song is very dated sounding and has no real definition or prominent tone that sticks out.
Keep working at it man,learn some theory and get a daw (I could be wrong but it "sounds" like you dont have one)
Learn about the use of your daws on board fx. Delays,reverbs,compression,EQ.
Your mix will stand out alot more.
