Soul trace
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 42 posts since 5 Sep, 2019
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Marcel Deneuve Marcel Deneuve https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=417376 - KVRer
- 14 posts since 14 Apr, 2018
The track is nice itself, but IMO something is wrong with the melody.
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- KVRAF
- 40243 posts since 11 Aug, 2008 from clown world
I listen to a lot of smooth jazz and jazz fusion. I'm not hearing a problem with the melody.
Mix: The bass needs some eq attention. The synth lead is a bit loud. The drums may be over-compressed or possibly the mastering is to blame. The guitar @ the end sounds horrible. Fizzy. Needs some body.
Very cool having the sax solo after the guitar solo and then breaking down to a lovely finish.
Overall, if the mix / mastering were improved, I think it would make all the difference. It's very nearly there imho.
Nice arrangement!
Mix: The bass needs some eq attention. The synth lead is a bit loud. The drums may be over-compressed or possibly the mastering is to blame. The guitar @ the end sounds horrible. Fizzy. Needs some body.
Very cool having the sax solo after the guitar solo and then breaking down to a lovely finish.
Overall, if the mix / mastering were improved, I think it would make all the difference. It's very nearly there imho.
Nice arrangement!
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- KVRist
- 71 posts since 17 Oct, 2005
Hello, i've listened your track,and i like but i think you can improve it .In my opinion is a ambient,cinematic track with some elements of jazz and fussion.But the feeling (to me) is electronic ambient music.I think a little bit more reverb in the synth lead and guitar could be great.As Aloysius post above,the bass can be improved.But the track is very good anyway.Thanks for sharing!
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 42 posts since 5 Sep, 2019
I thank you for your comments, however about the mix, today I can recognize more errors than in the past, when I made the mix. Maybe tomorrow I will resume my work better. I feel happy about the composition work already. An increase in mixing and mastering is always welcome !!!
Thank you again.
For Marcel:
I'm sorry but I don't hear anything that doesn't work in the melody
Thank you again.
For Marcel:
I'm sorry but I don't hear anything that doesn't work in the melody
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- KVRian
- 683 posts since 4 Jun, 2018 from Wiltshire, Uk
not a bad track man, arrangement wise...funky. it got better as it progressed. I think maybe the main melody is sticking out too much and could do with being blended back a bit with some delay or reverb? Maybe also add some tail to it (decay, release).
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 42 posts since 5 Sep, 2019
First of all, Frank, thank you for your comments. I created the melody on the piano before recording it and I can tell you that in my humble opinion it is in perfect tonality. I can't see things that are wrong, respecting personal tastes that can be different. Different is the mix / mastering that needs corrections as you kindly observed. Thanks again.
