Hillside Music - Patterns
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- 849 posts since 3 Jul, 2017
Please have a listen to 'Patterns', now uploaded on Soundcloud..
https://soundcloud.com/user-604301675/patterns0
Thank you.
https://soundcloud.com/user-604301675/patterns0
Thank you.
- KVRAF
- 1980 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
Liked the bass you used... that is up until 0:32 when it suddenly without warning, vanished. But thankfully it did make a re-appearance at 0:50! When the bass isn't there, the whole thing sounds a bit thin.
Overall I liked it though. Lots of variety, and quite unique. Liked the vocoder.
Overall I liked it though. Lots of variety, and quite unique. Liked the vocoder.
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- KVRAF
- 6304 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
The contrast between sections is striking. The piece is always subtlety evolving and never dull.
I would have preferred a bass less reminiscent of a TB-303 and less reverb in the mix.
Great job overall.
I would have preferred a bass less reminiscent of a TB-303 and less reverb in the mix.
Great job overall.
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- 849 posts since 3 Jul, 2017
Thank you Frantz for commenting. The stereo spread was added in the mastering process, might be a little much..
- KVRAF
- 11481 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
I loved the bass sound and motif. I did miss it during the early sections where it dropped out. Maybe you could have used a modified motif (lower volume, or maybe pitch shifted) during those sections. Nice vocoder sound and the mix was great.
Good work
Good work
- KVRAF
- 21191 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
The sudden drop of the bass and total shift to a completely different "tune" was jarring. The bouncing around of different ideas is a little chaotic but not uninteresting. Just difficult to follow. All in all, not bad but kind of disjointed for my tastes. I prefer more subtle transitions. This song seems like it doesn't know what it wants to be and is all over the place.
On the plus side, it's not boring and the mix is good.
On the plus side, it's not boring and the mix is good.
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Thanks for listening! Quite harsh transitions, I know, but hopefully listenable
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Thanks for your comment. The sections are standing on their own, I just glued them together But I am glad, you found something delightable in there..wagtunes wrote: ↑Tue Oct 01, 2019 11:56 pm The sudden drop of the bass and total shift to a completely different "tune" was jarring. The bouncing around of different ideas is a little chaotic but not uninteresting. Just difficult to follow. All in all, not bad but kind of disjointed for my tastes. I prefer more subtle transitions. This song seems like it doesn't know what it wants to be and is all over the place.
On the plus side, it's not boring and the mix is good.
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- 2738 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK
Great track. Very interesting with a solid mix. Nice work!
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Thanks for listening and commentingjethrobull wrote: ↑Mon Oct 07, 2019 6:55 am Great track. Very interesting with a solid mix. Nice work!