What need change

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pgvpgv333
KVRian
585 posts since 3 Dec, 2005 from Sweden

Post Fri Jun 14, 2019 11:49 pm

Hi. Will someone say what need to be changed, or you think
kust erease it.

Thankful for help.

https://soundcloud.com/pgvpgv333
Chicago

pgvpgv333
KVRian
585 posts since 3 Dec, 2005 from Sweden

Re: What need change

Post Sat Jun 15, 2019 6:09 am

Only of the Chicago song! Of course.

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wagtunes
KVRAF
17417 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: What need change

Post Sat Jun 15, 2019 12:18 pm

My Feedback

Music - 4
Instruments - 6
Performance - 3
Mix - 1

Overall - 3.5

Comments: Drums are dead. Total mud. Musically, I have no idea what to make of it. Sounds like a bunch of random notes to me. Mix is uneven. Some parts too loud, some parts too soft. Needs major work.

pgvpgv333
KVRian
585 posts since 3 Dec, 2005 from Sweden

Re: What need change

Post Sat Jun 15, 2019 12:50 pm

Thanks wagtunes

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jancivil
KVRAF
19147 posts since 20 Oct, 2007 from No Location

Re: What need change

Post Sat Jun 15, 2019 4:00 pm

The rhythmic stuff has possibilities but compositionally this is kind of a mess. Also the synth boops and so forth are atonal mostly and not in the good way, and there are a number of pretty dead spots where forward movement is concerned.

perpetual3
KVRian
1000 posts since 28 Sep, 2012

Re: What need change

Post Sat Jun 15, 2019 4:09 pm

Ha, I think it’s great.

I would love to hear you take it somewhere more structured, change the key, and then break it back down again. Clean up the low end a bit.

I like the second track even more.

pgvpgv333
KVRian
585 posts since 3 Dec, 2005 from Sweden

Re: What need change

Post Sat Jun 15, 2019 9:37 pm

Thanks all, just went into a lifelong depression!

perpetual3
KVRian
1000 posts since 28 Sep, 2012

Re: What need change

Post Sun Jun 16, 2019 3:47 am

pgvpgv333 wrote:
Sat Jun 15, 2019 9:37 pm
Thanks all, just went into a lifelong depression!
No, man, seriously I think it’s great, I’m sure many others would too.

pgvpgv333
KVRian
585 posts since 3 Dec, 2005 from Sweden

Re: What need change

Post Sun Jun 16, 2019 6:59 am

Perpetual you are a pearl. Back on the road again. Got to make it to this mounths chipmunk.

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thecontrolcentre
KVRAF
24942 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny

Re: What need change

Post Sun Jun 16, 2019 7:17 am

Highly original :hihi:

Guy Produce
KVRer
22 posts since 23 Jun, 2019

Re: What need change

Post Wed Jul 03, 2019 11:16 am

I really like the sound that reminds me a little bit of a mario game that spawned in the middle of the track, I felt they fit good into the track. It is the steely like sound. I wonder how you made it! Other then that, I don't really feel where the track is going, if you know what I mean. Hilsen en fyr fra Norge :)

pgvpgv333
KVRian
585 posts since 3 Dec, 2005 from Sweden

Re: What need change

Post Thu Jul 04, 2019 4:52 am

Thanks Guy. Nice you like it. Dont remember how i got the sound. If you want to listen to more, I am Woodpeckerman on Youtube and Spotify

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