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The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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Quite a nice piece for this mood !

The modulations and various sound transformations are very nice. The contrast between the lush background and the 'electronics'. The appearance of a soft pad bass at 1:04 arrives at the just the right time. And the drop back to the 'electronics' at 2:40 after the strings have driven home the mood is also just right. The mix is appropriate, everything seems to be just right and aligned, working together to deliver the mood.

First time I'm listening to a piece made by you. As time goes by I'll listen to more on your soundcloud page.

Cheers.

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My Feedback

Music - 8.5
Instruments - 9.5
Performance - 10
Mix - 9

Overall - 9.25

Comments: Nice intro. Too bad it lasts for the whole song. So it's essentially a 3 note motif played throughout with lots of variations in the sounds around it. As pieces like these go, this one isn't too bad. The instruments were very nice. The ending didn't fit at all and kind of ruined things a bit but otherwise, one of the better pieces without a real melody posted here. Now THAT'S how you do ambient. Just lose the ending and it's pretty darn good.

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for a good review, that's pretty brutal
:hihi:

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The amount of different things that can be grouped under 'Ambient' is impressive.

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mevla wrote: Fri Apr 19, 2019 3:40 pm Quite a nice piece for this mood !

The modulations and various sound transformations are very nice. The contrast between the lush background and the 'electronics'. The appearance of a soft pad bass at 1:04 arrives at the just the right time. And the drop back to the 'electronics' at 2:40 after the strings have driven home the mood is also just right. The mix is appropriate, everything seems to be just right and aligned, working together to deliver the mood.

First time I'm listening to a piece made by you. As time goes by I'll listen to more on your soundcloud page.

Cheers.
Thank you very much for taking the time to listen and comment. Really appreciate your thoughts :tu:
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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Call me easily entertained, but I really enjoyed this. It's not about how many notes you use, but how you use them, right?

To be fair, I get where wags is coming from, different strokes for different folks and all that. To me, this ticked all the right boxes for the genre.

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wagtunes wrote: Fri Apr 19, 2019 3:46 pm My Feedback

Music - 8.5
Instruments - 9.5
Performance - 10
Mix - 9

Overall - 9.25

Comments: Nice intro. Too bad it lasts for the whole song. So it's essentially a 3 note motif played throughout with lots of variations in the sounds around it. As pieces like these go, this one isn't too bad. The instruments were very nice. The ending didn't fit at all and kind of ruined things a bit but otherwise, one of the better pieces without a real melody posted here. Now THAT'S how you do ambient. Just lose the ending and it's pretty darn good.
Thank's Wags. I appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment.
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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sjm wrote: Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:51 pm Call me easily entertained, but I really enjoyed this. It's not about how many notes you use, but how you use them, right?

To be fair, I get where wags is coming from, different strokes for different folks and all that. To me, this ticked all the right boxes for the genre.
Thank you for the listen,I really appreciate it.Glad you enjoyed it. :tu:
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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nice piece... with its minimalism it escorts and carries "inner action" and contemplation very well.
i enjoyed it.

regards,
tl.

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Even though I like very busy music, there is also a place for minimal stuff. I like this...
There is enough variation in the three notes and with everything else to let it drift, which is how I see ambient.
Well done!
:)
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Music with progressive intent.

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loved it.. I wouldn't mind a bit more of an electronic edge personally, it's hinted at but I'd love it if the electronics overtake the piano and strings at some point. But then, it would be hard to do that in a way that's not cheesy as hell so maybe not.

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tl wrote: Wed Apr 24, 2019 8:00 am nice piece... with its minimalism it escorts and carries "inner action" and contemplation very well.
i enjoyed it.

regards,
tl.
Thank you so much for taking the time to listen,I really appreciate it. :tu:
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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Allomerus wrote: Thu Apr 25, 2019 12:36 pm Even though I like very busy music, there is also a place for minimal stuff. I like this...
There is enough variation in the three notes and with everything else to let it drift, which is how I see ambient.
Well done!
:)
Hey thank you Allomerus. So glad you enjoyed it.Always a pleasure hearing your thoughts :hug:
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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I like it !

I think you had a film score in mind
and nothing like the picture you choosed for YT
I would imagine a film scene from "Contact 2"
where the aliens not only expose themselves
but give the protagonist hope that they will take him with them
and eventually the spaceship disappears in one exa-second
leaving the protagonist puzzled, feared and disappointed

So in that case the end works perfectly well :-)

(( D ))

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