Geomystery - P. Ark (chiilout, lounge)

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Soimmo
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139 posts since 14 Aug, 2011 from Moravia (CZ)

Post Mon Mar 18, 2019 3:57 am

Some super simple elevatror music to chiil-out:

https://soundcloud.com/geomystery/geomystery-p-ark

Any comments are welcome.

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Wopelka
KVRAF
3208 posts since 22 Sep, 2003 from under the sun

Re: Geomystery - P. Ark (chiilout, lounge)

Post Mon Mar 18, 2019 6:27 am

I like the overall feel, dreamy and laid-back. Sound wise, I like the bass, the guitar and the e-piano. I'm less impressed by the drums and the synthy lead. Overall, even though there are a lot of different episodes, the music lacks of variety. It is as if we were always hearing the same loop over and over again. A pity, because there are a lot of good ideas all along this pseudo-loop. I am also not convinced by the harsh beginning and the brutal ending of the track. I am of the opinion that the intro and the outro are among the most important parts of a track, and they are missing here.

Soimmo
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139 posts since 14 Aug, 2011 from Moravia (CZ)

Re: Geomystery - P. Ark (chiilout, lounge)

Post Mon Mar 18, 2019 9:36 am

Hi, Wopelka

Thank you for your valuable insight. Iam taking it on board.

Iam too lazy to make some intro and outro, but maybe simple fade-in and fade-out would be better than sharp attack.

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layzer
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6532 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Re: Geomystery - P. Ark (chiilout, lounge)

Post Mon Mar 18, 2019 4:43 pm

yeah, the stick starts to get annoying. i dont mind the lead
theres people that love/hate resonant meow synths... i like em.
it is a fairly repeating , safe, vanilla ditty that should have been over about the 3min mark.
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]

Soimmo
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139 posts since 14 Aug, 2011 from Moravia (CZ)

Re: Geomystery - P. Ark (chiilout, lounge)

Post Mon Mar 18, 2019 11:28 pm

Layzer: Did you actually listened to whole track?

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layzer
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6532 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Re: Geomystery - P. Ark (chiilout, lounge)

Post Tue Mar 19, 2019 5:24 pm

Soimmo wrote:
Mon Mar 18, 2019 11:28 pm
Layzer: Did you actually listened to whole track?
all the way to the last meows @6:27
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]

Soimmo
KVRist
139 posts since 14 Aug, 2011 from Moravia (CZ)

Re: Geomystery - P. Ark (chiilout, lounge)

Post Tue Mar 19, 2019 11:40 pm

Ok, thank you.

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