The Escape by Shoestring (Synthwave)

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Hey guys. It's me again. I have been busy again with another Synthwave track. Please let me know your thoughts. I hope this mix isn't too loud this time unlike Complications. The vocal samples are also from Night of The Living Dead.

https://soundcloud.com/devin-cooper-620 ... the-escape
Software: Reason 10, Acid Pro 8, Reaper, Sibelius,RapidComposer,Captain Plugins, Orb Plugins
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The mid-high frequency range is cluttered with leads that are sustained for bars. You would be better off replacing these slow moving leads with a softer pad that sits in the background. This would make space for the melody which has to fight for space in the mix when it arrives.

I think it develops too slowly and the movie samples are too loud.

Lots of potential but there is also room for improvement I think. Keep plugging away. :tu:

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Frantz wrote: Wed Dec 12, 2018 4:26 am The mid-high frequency range is cluttered with leads that are sustained for bars. You would be better off replacing these slow moving leads with a softer pad that sits in the background. This would make space for the melody which has to fight for space in the mix when it arrives.

I think it develops too slowly and the movie samples are too loud.

Lots of potential but there is also room for improvement I think. Keep plugging away. :tu:
Thank you. I greatly appreciate your feedback!
Software: Reason 10, Acid Pro 8, Reaper, Sibelius,RapidComposer,Captain Plugins, Orb Plugins
https://soundcloud.com/devin-cooper-620205327
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Sounds good to me. I would have cut it off around the 3.30 mark, but that's just nit picking.

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-Fature- wrote: Wed Dec 12, 2018 4:56 pm Sounds good to me. I would have cut it off around the 3.30 mark, but that's just nit picking.
Thanks Fature for the feedback! It has been a while. I have been thinking about reducing it's length and bringing the bridge in earlier. I'm currently been removing/changing some elements that make the mix muddy due to Frantz feedback.

EDIT: Made some slight changes to the drums to hear the Kick Drum better, tried to clear up the mid range a little,and slightly shortened the length.
Software: Reason 10, Acid Pro 8, Reaper, Sibelius,RapidComposer,Captain Plugins, Orb Plugins
https://soundcloud.com/devin-cooper-620205327
Need help with writing Lyrics, Try This: https://lyricstudio.net/?via=devin

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