The Escape by Shoestring (Synthwave)
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silenthill2006 silenthill2006 https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=128742
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 546 posts since 16 Nov, 2006
Hey guys. It's me again. I have been busy again with another Synthwave track. Please let me know your thoughts. I hope this mix isn't too loud this time unlike Complications. The vocal samples are also from Night of The Living Dead.
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- KVRAF
- 6304 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
The mid-high frequency range is cluttered with leads that are sustained for bars. You would be better off replacing these slow moving leads with a softer pad that sits in the background. This would make space for the melody which has to fight for space in the mix when it arrives.
I think it develops too slowly and the movie samples are too loud.
Lots of potential but there is also room for improvement I think. Keep plugging away.
I think it develops too slowly and the movie samples are too loud.
Lots of potential but there is also room for improvement I think. Keep plugging away.
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silenthill2006 silenthill2006 https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=128742
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 546 posts since 16 Nov, 2006
Thank you. I greatly appreciate your feedback!Frantz wrote: ↑Wed Dec 12, 2018 4:26 am The mid-high frequency range is cluttered with leads that are sustained for bars. You would be better off replacing these slow moving leads with a softer pad that sits in the background. This would make space for the melody which has to fight for space in the mix when it arrives.
I think it develops too slowly and the movie samples are too loud.
Lots of potential but there is also room for improvement I think. Keep plugging away.
Software: Reason 10, Acid Pro 8, Reaper, Sibelius,RapidComposer,Captain Plugins, Orb Plugins
https://soundcloud.com/devin-cooper-620205327
Need help with writing Lyrics, Try This: https://lyricstudio.net/?via=devin
https://soundcloud.com/devin-cooper-620205327
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silenthill2006 silenthill2006 https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=128742
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 546 posts since 16 Nov, 2006
Thanks Fature for the feedback! It has been a while. I have been thinking about reducing it's length and bringing the bridge in earlier. I'm currently been removing/changing some elements that make the mix muddy due to Frantz feedback.
EDIT: Made some slight changes to the drums to hear the Kick Drum better, tried to clear up the mid range a little,and slightly shortened the length.
Software: Reason 10, Acid Pro 8, Reaper, Sibelius,RapidComposer,Captain Plugins, Orb Plugins
https://soundcloud.com/devin-cooper-620205327
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https://soundcloud.com/devin-cooper-620205327
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