New song - Chill out?
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 339 posts since 22 Oct, 2009 from Bandung, Indonesia
Hi all,
It's been quite sometimes.Here is my latest tune, a bit of a chill out track I suppose? Well, no matter, have a listen, hope you can enjoy To me it has a bit of a sense of looking for something that is not there, or a kind of unfinished/unresolved feel. What do you think?
https://soundcloud.com/thedeadsoul/chasing-ghosts
Best,
Adi/Thedeadsoul
It's been quite sometimes.Here is my latest tune, a bit of a chill out track I suppose? Well, no matter, have a listen, hope you can enjoy To me it has a bit of a sense of looking for something that is not there, or a kind of unfinished/unresolved feel. What do you think?
https://soundcloud.com/thedeadsoul/chasing-ghosts
Best,
Adi/Thedeadsoul
Spotify https://tinyurl.com/4zn3kaby , Apple Music https://tinyurl.com/musa9zdr , Youtube topic https://tinyurl.com/yckw46jd , Youtube personal page https://tinyurl.com/5ymu97r9 , Soundcloud www.soundcloud.com/thedeadsoul
- KVRAF
- 21191 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
My Feedback
Music - 8.5
Instruments - 8
Performance - 9
Mix - 7.5
Overall - 8.25
Comments: Piano needs something. Not sure what it is, whether a slight boost in volume or a little EQ. It's just not quite right. The mix in general seems subdued. It isn't terrible. In fact, it's fine. Just missing something. Maybe Layzer can point out what it is with his Layzersound analysis. Musically, very pleasant. I think it needs more on the high end. That's it. Just a tad dull.
Music - 8.5
Instruments - 8
Performance - 9
Mix - 7.5
Overall - 8.25
Comments: Piano needs something. Not sure what it is, whether a slight boost in volume or a little EQ. It's just not quite right. The mix in general seems subdued. It isn't terrible. In fact, it's fine. Just missing something. Maybe Layzer can point out what it is with his Layzersound analysis. Musically, very pleasant. I think it needs more on the high end. That's it. Just a tad dull.
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
hi Adi, great to HEAR you again, been a while!
nice one... i liked the chord progression and the nice horn solo at the end.
one tip, however:
the arps play too long and need a counter melody to break their repetition.
the overall volume is a little low, and it lacks a little low end.
and yes, Wags... this would sound much different in LAYZERSOUND(C)
overall i enjoyed it
nice one... i liked the chord progression and the nice horn solo at the end.
one tip, however:
the arps play too long and need a counter melody to break their repetition.
the overall volume is a little low, and it lacks a little low end.
and yes, Wags... this would sound much different in LAYZERSOUND(C)
overall i enjoyed it
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- KVRian
- 884 posts since 3 Jan, 2016
I enjoyed your song. The piano is dark and mellow but I like the feeling of it. I wonder how a brighter or closer miked piano would fit in.
Nice!
Nice!
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- KVRian
- 766 posts since 23 Sep, 2003 from UK
I like the overall concept of the tune and how it progresses. The arp for me gets a tad annoying after a little while, but that horn solo at the end is excellent
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 339 posts since 22 Oct, 2009 from Bandung, Indonesia
Hi all,
many thanks for your feedback, much appreciated! Yes, I believe I can still do more with this tune, so all comments are welcome. My first task is obviously to work with the arp, then to the other suggestions!
Layzer, it's good to be back, it's been too long
Best,
Adi/Thedeadsoul
many thanks for your feedback, much appreciated! Yes, I believe I can still do more with this tune, so all comments are welcome. My first task is obviously to work with the arp, then to the other suggestions!
Layzer, it's good to be back, it's been too long
Best,
Adi/Thedeadsoul
Spotify https://tinyurl.com/4zn3kaby , Apple Music https://tinyurl.com/musa9zdr , Youtube topic https://tinyurl.com/yckw46jd , Youtube personal page https://tinyurl.com/5ymu97r9 , Soundcloud www.soundcloud.com/thedeadsoul
- KVRAF
- 11481 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
I think you could possibly start fading the main arp somewhere between 2:50 and 3:00, whilst bringing up the volume of the secondary arp(s) between 2:50 and 3:33. I was quite happy with the sombre piano intro and the ending worked very well.
Good work, Adi
Good work, Adi
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 339 posts since 22 Oct, 2009 from Bandung, Indonesia
Hi Tim,
Apologize for my late reply! Many thanks for your comment, and yes I will definitely work on the arp. I think your timing suggestion will work well, I will try to experiment with it.
Best,
Adi/Thedeadsoul
Apologize for my late reply! Many thanks for your comment, and yes I will definitely work on the arp. I think your timing suggestion will work well, I will try to experiment with it.
Best,
Adi/Thedeadsoul
Spotify https://tinyurl.com/4zn3kaby , Apple Music https://tinyurl.com/musa9zdr , Youtube topic https://tinyurl.com/yckw46jd , Youtube personal page https://tinyurl.com/5ymu97r9 , Soundcloud www.soundcloud.com/thedeadsoul