song i did for some girl (more genre-defiance)

[funky lime]

did this one night after seeing she with whom i feel i'm destined to love, but never will. not an emotional song by any means... just inspired by her in every way.

i cut the vocals at the beginning since i lack confidence, and because they were simply ATROCIOUS.

song starts out alright, then gets worse, then gets fun after a minute and a half, with some traditional funky-lime-monosynth-action. so if you can't bear the beginning with my shitty lead guitar skillzz, just fast foward a minute or so...

comment, criticize please... and if you want to sing for it, PM me

http://funkylime.panicnow.net/music/fun ... xthree.mp3

[funky lime]

another one quickly fades into obscurity...
bump?

[ouroboros]

cool, f.l.
for some reason the intro guitar had a very "Hall&Oates" sound to me, overall a kind of 80's sound to it? I liked it; especially the composition/feel changes through out - a kind of journey. I might pan the snare and the percussion more? it sounds a little flat, but I believe b/c of panning not eq/ Cool job. I hope she hears it