(Techno/Trance) Samiver song corner
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 342 posts since 11 May, 2020
A new track from me. any comments appreciated
https://soundcloud.com/tim-pope-4683167 ... al_sharing
https://soundcloud.com/tim-pope-4683167 ... al_sharing
Last edited by Samiver on Sun Apr 14, 2024 8:00 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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- KVRist
- 205 posts since 17 Aug, 2012
I enjoyed the listen. Nice overall sound. Fat basses, tight drums and nice, airy pads. Well done!
I like the drums and percussions.
The mix seems very loud to me. Louder than my tracks, and they are already quite loud.
I like the drums and percussions.
The mix seems very loud to me. Louder than my tracks, and they are already quite loud.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 342 posts since 11 May, 2020
Thanks for the listen and commentskvruser1000 wrote: ↑Mon Mar 04, 2024 2:25 pm I enjoyed the listen. Nice overall sound. Fat basses, tight drums and nice, airy pads. Well done!
I like the drums and percussions.
The mix seems very loud to me. Louder than my tracks, and they are already quite loud.
I am not sure what lufs this track is but seem to recall around - 8 or - 9. I tend to just master based on the song but I have been trying clipping on some individual channels and it does seem to make things a bit more aggressive even if I am only clipping a tiny amount (only a hobbyist so always trying to learn new things)
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 342 posts since 11 May, 2020
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 342 posts since 11 May, 2020
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 342 posts since 11 May, 2020
As always looking for feedback/constructive criticism to help me learn.
hope someone enjoys this.
https://soundcloud.com/tim-pope-4683167 ... al_sharing
hope someone enjoys this.
https://soundcloud.com/tim-pope-4683167 ... al_sharing
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- KVRian
- 533 posts since 15 Aug, 2011 from Teesside
Only thing I think missing is a ride! There is a clicking in the breakdown, at the points the track is most open it stands out as not masked by other sounds, you could try work to remove that. Soundstage is nice, every thing is well placed for that submersive effect.
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- KVRist
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- 342 posts since 11 May, 2020
Thanks for the listen and feedback, appreciated . Few things for me to take on board and work on.mitchiemasha wrote: ↑Mon Apr 29, 2024 10:19 pm Only thing I think missing is a ride! There is a clicking in the breakdown, at the points the track is most open it stands out as not masked by other sounds, you could try work to remove that. Soundstage is nice, every thing is well placed for that submersive effect.
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- KVRian
- 533 posts since 15 Aug, 2011 from Teesside
Listening to your other tracks. I think Kiss was a step back, especially in your kick bass relationship, the groove here wasn't as together as abyss, listening to just the low content. Otherwise everything else was spot on! I really struggle to set the sound stage you have... reverbs etc, the air... just end up sounding ugly. Your air is good!
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- KVRist
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- 342 posts since 11 May, 2020
Thanks appreciate it. Re kiss I have had similar feedback re the groove and agree. It was a track in one day thing as opposed to my others so I may go back and remix it to fix.
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- KVRist
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- 342 posts since 11 May, 2020