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Last edited by jethrobull on Sat Dec 07, 2019 8:43 am, edited 1 time in total.
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i like it!
very dystopian future 8)
nice rhythm, works with the intermittent glitchys :D :tu:

on my phone so mix cannot really be commented on, no stereo and no bass :lol: (on the phone, track could be full of it for all i can hear)

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vurt wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2019 10:38 pm i like it!
very dystopian future 8)
nice rhythm, works with the intermittent glitchys :D :tu:

on my phone so mix cannot really be commented on, no stereo and no bass :lol: (on the phone, track could be full of it for all i can hear)
Why, thank you Sir! Much appreciated :tu:
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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checks all the boxes ...
my favorite of yours i've listened to ...
well produced and well played , w/ an effective build upon the main theme ...
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Nice one Jethro ... very dark and bombastic. Kick has a lovely thump to it without overpowering the track. Great job :)

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experimental.crow wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2019 10:51 pm checks all the boxes ...
my favorite of yours i've listened to ...
well produced and well played , w/ an effective build upon the main theme ...
:tu:
Thank you for the listen and the kind words.
Glad you like it :)
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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thecontrolcentre wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2019 10:58 pm Nice one Jethro ... very dark and bombastic. Kick has a lovely thump to it without overpowering the track. Great job :)
And nice one for the listen and the positive feedback. Really appreciate it, thanks! :tu:
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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jethrobull wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2019 10:48 pm
vurt wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2019 10:38 pm i like it!
very dystopian future 8)
nice rhythm, works with the intermittent glitchys :D :tu:

on my phone so mix cannot really be commented on, no stereo and no bass :lol: (on the phone, track could be full of it for all i can hear)
Why, thank you Sir! Much appreciated :tu:
no problem, thanks for sharing.
ill have a proper listen tomorrow now the cats allowing me in to the studio :hihi:

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Nice choice of sounds and sounddesign. The track comes in well with the evolving string passages. Also the rhythm I like. Good job!

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I think the drums are far too busy and too brittle sounding (too much top end). They don't suit the rest of what's going on at all, or maybe they are too prominent in the mix (or both). The rest of it sounds great, though (otherwise I wouldn't have bothered commenting at all).
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htcnext2 wrote: Sat Dec 07, 2019 11:24 am Nice choice of sounds and sounddesign. The track comes in well with the evolving string passages. Also the rhythm I like. Good job!
Thank you very much. I appreciate the kind words :tu:
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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BONES wrote: Sat Dec 07, 2019 1:59 pm I think the drums are far too busy and too brittle sounding (too much top end). They don't suit the rest of what's going on at all, or maybe they are too prominent in the mix (or both). The rest of it sounds great, though (otherwise I wouldn't have bothered commenting at all).
Thank you for taking the time to listen and comment, I appreciate it! :tu:
Yeah, the drums are intentionally upfront but maybe too much? Will shave some top end off them and see if that helps.
Glad you enjoyed the rest, thanks for the feedback.
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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Another good un. Definitely got that early New Order thing (not so much the sounds etc, which are more contemporary, but the chords etc) again, which is a good thing!

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Early in the track, I would have said what BONES said about the percussion. At about halfway through I got it in a different way, and loved it. Then when they dropped, I just missed them.

Overall great mood and feel to this track. Rich sounds give a solid bed. I loved some of the trailing effects at certain points in the percussion, and almost wished those effects came back in as their own synth-y percussion-y thing.

Nothing to really change. Good job.

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Develops nicely over the course of the piece, and the sounds are well chosen. The ending without the percussion was a nice touch, and I thought that section could have been longer.

Made me think it could have been part of a movie soundtrack, maybe as vurt said, something of a dystopian nature.

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