New Song - "Sitting Duck" (and a remake of an older one)

[jbraner]

Hi,

I've got a new song out. It's called "sitting Duck" - you can check it
out here:
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13944445

Featuring:
Avenger and Pigments synths
various odds and ends
MODO Bass
Superior 3 Drums
and me playing Strats and a Tele


Also, there's a remake of one I did from 2004 - featuring samples of David Kolker (great guitarist from NYC).
It's called "I Still Don't Know"
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13944449


Don't forget - CDs (including my newest one "Pull the Other One")
are also available at https://www.cdbaby.com/Artist/JohnBraner
and all the normal streaming services.

As usual, let me know what you think.

[enroe]

Good rhythm start - but then I waited for the vocals to come in.
Hooo, this seems to be an instrumental, right? Ok then.

What I missed: The guitar parts could be louder and more
dominant. This song "Sitting Duck" flows niceley - but it doesn't
have a hooky part that can be remembered, that stays in the ear.
So it is nice but it could be improved IMO .

[jbraner]

Thanks a lot for listening enroe - and thank you for the comments!
I want to hear what people think

As for being an instrumental - well, that's what I do - but I'm always open to suggestions.