Better timing? Better had I not written this train wreck in the first place.MasterTuner wrote: ↑Thu Jun 13, 2019 7:07 pm The most intriguing part of your songs is how you end them. They are very well ended, and often a different vibe or chord progression that often you might find in a bridge.
"dance floor everyday" and "dirt cowboy stand in my way" lines would have liked to see them fit better timing-wise.
Your songs are certainly unique and interesting. I don't find myself skipping a few bars here and there like I do with other people generally because I know whats coming next.
I was almost embarrassed to post this but I figured my detractors needed something to rag on me about.
Anyway, glad you found something redeeming here. Thanks for the listen and the feedback.