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faxesperlenbacher · Post by **faxesperlenbacher** » Fri May 17, 2019 1:09 pm

hello guys, here's my latest effort

a techno-trance style song from the 90s / '00s

I hope you like it! Greetings from Italy

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LuWWsBDppzM

Bansaw · Post by **Bansaw** » Mon May 20, 2019 12:03 am

From 2:20 > you could keep the melody and progression & change some of sounds to more retro, slow down the bmp a little, and you'd have Italo disco!

fastlanephil · Post by **fastlanephil** » Mon May 20, 2019 12:15 am

It sounds like a decent EDM tune. Pretty minimalistic but it works for me.

wagtunes · Post by **wagtunes** » Mon May 20, 2019 1:42 am

My Feedback

Music - 7
Instruments - 8
Performance - 7.5
Mix - 8.5

Overall - 7.75

Comments: Cliche'd EDM track without much going on in it. I don't mind minimalist but this does very little for me, especially at 5 minutes in length. Really needs more to it. After a minute and a half I was already bored. By the time the melody comes in it's too late. I've already turned the station. The song should have ended at about 3 minutes tops.

faxesperlenbacher · Post by **faxesperlenbacher** » Mon May 20, 2019 10:20 am

wagtunes wrote: ↑Mon May 20, 2019 1:42 am My Feedback

Music - 7
Instruments - 8
Performance - 7.5
Mix - 8.5

Overall - 7.75

Comments: Cliche'd EDM track without much going on in it. I don't mind minimalist but this does very little for me, especially at 5 minutes in length. Really needs more to it. After a minute and a half I was already bored. By the time the melody comes in it's too late. I've already turned the station. The song should have ended at about 3 minutes tops.

thank you very much for the careful criticism. In fact the song is really very simple from the melodic / instrumental point of view, but I wanted precisely to follow those simple sounds and drafts typical of the techno / trance of the 90s / '00s, thanks again for your evaluation that will allow me to improve

faxesperlenbacher · Post by **faxesperlenbacher** » Mon May 20, 2019 10:24 am

fastlanephil wrote: ↑Mon May 20, 2019 12:15 am It sounds like a decent EDM tune. Pretty minimalistic but it works for me.

right observation

in fact the EDM of today is nothing but the commercial techno / trance of the 90s / '00 but slowed to 128 bpm

faxesperlenbacher · Post by **faxesperlenbacher** » Mon May 20, 2019 10:24 am

Bansaw wrote: ↑Mon May 20, 2019 12:03 am From 2:20 > you could keep the melody and progression & change some of sounds to more retro, slow down the bmp a little, and you'd have Italo disco!

Thanx for your support ^__^

Faxe Sperlenbacher - Run 4 Nothing (Club Mix)