KVR Audio

mindstuff · Post by **mindstuff** » Fri Jun 21, 2019 6:20 am

I feel like I'm drowning...

https://soundcloud.com/user-117743396/drowning

wagtunes · Post by **wagtunes** » Fri Jun 21, 2019 9:17 pm

My Feedback

Music - 8
Instruments - 8
Performance - 8
Mix - 9.5

Overall - 8.375

Comments: Intro and what comes after it don't seem to go together at all. I feel a huge disconnect between the two. Eventually we return back and mix it up but the initial transition is a little jarring. Musically, kind of odd. Don't really know what to make of this one. At least it wasn't boring.

Bansaw · Post by **Bansaw** » Sat Jun 22, 2019 4:52 pm

I was really intrigued by the intro, the water sounds, the interesting arp, then a completely different song emerged. If it was me I'd go back to the intro and really expand that and make that into a song just by itself.

Heavenly Sounds · Post by **Heavenly Sounds** » Sun Jun 23, 2019 7:56 am

I like it. Sounds pretty good to me.

Skyfall72 · Post by **Skyfall72** » Tue Jun 25, 2019 6:14 pm

Sound and mood is there but the rest needs more work. I think the tempo needs to be adjusted.

[Electronic] tm-Drowning