What need change

[pgvpgv333]

Hi. Will someone say what need to be changed, or you think
kust erease it.

Thankful for help.

https://soundcloud.com/pgvpgv333
Chicago

[pgvpgv333]

Only of the Chicago song! Of course.

[wagtunes]

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Music - 4
Instruments - 6
Performance - 3
Mix - 1

Overall - 3.5

Comments: Drums are dead. Total mud. Musically, I have no idea what to make of it. Sounds like a bunch of random notes to me. Mix is uneven. Some parts too loud, some parts too soft. Needs major work.

[pgvpgv333]

Thanks wagtunes

[jancivil]

The rhythmic stuff has possibilities but compositionally this is kind of a mess. Also the synth boops and so forth are atonal mostly and not in the good way, and there are a number of pretty dead spots where forward movement is concerned.

[perpetual3]

Ha, I think it’s great.

I would love to hear you take it somewhere more structured, change the key, and then break it back down again. Clean up the low end a bit.

I like the second track even more.

[pgvpgv333]

Thanks all, just went into a lifelong depression!

[perpetual3]

Thanks all, just went into a lifelong depression!

No, man, seriously I think it’s great, I’m sure many others would too.

[pgvpgv333]

Perpetual you are a pearl. Back on the road again. Got to make it to this mounths chipmunk.

[thecontrolcentre]

Highly original

[Guy Produce]

I really like the sound that reminds me a little bit of a mario game that spawned in the middle of the track, I felt they fit good into the track. It is the steely like sound. I wonder how you made it! Other then that, I don't really feel where the track is going, if you know what I mean. Hilsen en fyr fra Norge

[pgvpgv333]

Thanks Guy. Nice you like it. Dont remember how i got the sound. If you want to listen to more, I am Woodpeckerman on Youtube and Spotify