KVR Audio

Adrian Earnshaw Music · Sun Dec 02, 2018 8:16 pm

Here we go with a new track to relax to before the week starts. Check out the front page of https://www.biodiode.com

or visit #YouTube here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SfZZcUh95AQ

or if you do # SoundCloud then get yourself over to https://soundcloud.com/biodiode/cosmic-lensing

Saffran · Post by **Saffran** » Sun Dec 02, 2018 8:25 pm

Very good.
Clean voices, nice melody and rhytm. A good composition.

wagtunes · Post by **wagtunes** » Sun Dec 02, 2018 9:09 pm

My Feedback

Music - 7.5
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9.5
Mix - 9

Overall - 8.75

Comments: Right away, IMO, drums could use a little more punch. That's just a preference thing though. Nothing really "wrong" with them as is but I'd like a little more oomph. Possibly a db or two louder would do it. Maybe a tad more low end. Rest of mix is fine. Interesting melody. Would like a change from the same chord progression throughout. Don't really hear a variation until about 2:30 in. Musically seems "safe." I'd like to hear you take more chances with this piece as I hear a lot of potential in it. All this of course just my pretty worthless opinion so take it all with a grain of salt.

Adrian Earnshaw Music · Sun Dec 02, 2018 9:24 pm

Thanks Saffran.
Thanks wagtunes, I never think your opinion is worthless. There's always something in the feedback that I can take away and learn from. I think I boxed myself into a corner on this one and couldn't see a way out, which may explain why it seems musically safe. I was just glad that I could get this to a stage I could call finished, although nothing ever is.

Bansaw · Post by **Bansaw** » Sun Dec 02, 2018 11:34 pm

good job.
you could make the video more interesting. there's some good free cc0 stock footage over at pixabay.com
I'm using some of it for my next track

Adrian Earnshaw Music · Tue Dec 04, 2018 8:37 pm

Thanks Bansaw, I forgot about pixabay.

fastlanephil · Post by **fastlanephil** » Wed Dec 05, 2018 12:52 am

I thought it was good. It sounds like smooth, laid back EDM with low key rhythm. I could image it being used for a video or movie ending/credits or just for listening.

Adrian Earnshaw Music · Thu Dec 06, 2018 9:38 pm

Thanks Phil, glad you liked it.

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Wed Dec 12, 2018 6:31 am

nice catchy,melodic tune. the kick is a little weak, but i didn't really mind listening on phones.
your stuff still reminds me of later Alphaville. good job

Adrian Earnshaw Music · Wed Dec 12, 2018 9:56 am

Thanks layzer I appreciate your feedback. Really going to have check out Alphaville

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