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Karbon L. Forms · Post by **Karbon L. Forms** » Sat Jun 26, 2004 4:04 pm

...Shite.

http://karbonlifeforms.kicks-ass.net/webshite/

My first electronic track world! I'm a guitarist to trade so it's not even really the genre I'm planning but for some reason I like it.

If I was going to develop it further (like finish it though perhaps euthenasia is best option) what would you suggest?

Karbon L. Forms · Post by **Karbon L. Forms** » Sat Jun 26, 2004 5:56 pm

Well it's either not downloading properly or your all too gobsmacked by its level of shitosity!

putte · Post by **putte** » Sun Jun 27, 2004 12:33 am

its not downloading here .. sorry ..

pao · Post by **pao** » Sun Jun 27, 2004 2:00 am

I can't get it either.

Karbon L. Forms · Post by **Karbon L. Forms** » Sun Jun 27, 2004 8:03 am

Had to turn computer off as the electricity was about to run out. Sorry for denying you the experience

mystahr · Post by **mystahr** » Sun Jun 27, 2004 10:26 am

Got it now......

what would you suggest?

I'm a guitarist to trade

Where is it then? You can get all sorts of melodies layered in here to get something good going.

I would suggest recording live takes on the guitar. This track seriously needs a bit more variation. That said, I must say that I really like the groove you have going on.

Karbon L. Forms · Post by **Karbon L. Forms** » Sun Jun 27, 2004 3:59 pm

Mystahr wrote:Got it now......

what would you suggest?

I'm a guitarist to trade
Where is it then? You can get all sorts of melodies layered in here to get something good going.

I would suggest recording live takes on the guitar. This track seriously needs a bit more variation. That said, I must say that I really like the groove you have going on.

Thanks dude. I was just experimenting with midi programming and VSTi really. I have yet to do any guitar recording. What do you think? Screaming lead or jingle jangle? Adding guitar means finding a place for it in the mix and i'm scared!
I think some lead while the second bass-line is playing is in order (the one that uses a sampled rickenbacker (from CM coverdisk) not the synth one near start)

Thanks for your advice. As far as I know for sure you're the second person to hear it (except for my greyhound!).

I know it's a bit dull and I agree it's got a good groove. "driving" is a word I'd use?

Just checking out some of your stuff but you've got a lot! What tracks would you recommend? Bearing in mind that I'm not a huge ambient fan (and I can't afford pot

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I was afraid I'd get told to stop posting shite and wait until I had more skill!

mystahr · Post by **mystahr** » Mon Jun 28, 2004 6:59 am

I was afraid I'd get told to stop posting shite and wait until I had more skill!

Not here at KvR

and a small bump

Which tracks to recommend

I'd say all of them, but I guess try one or two of the latest to see if you like what you're hearing.

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