KVR Audio

winkie00 · Post by **winkie00** » Sat Oct 15, 2016 10:05 am

Hope you like it.
https://soundcloud.com/winkie00/little-sweet-touch

winkie00 · Post by **winkie00** » Sat Oct 15, 2016 10:22 am

Just thought I would comment on anyone having a brain block with their music. Try something different, I have just bought Maschine Jam and the way it works matches my brain. Has helped me to fit the parts together easier. : ))

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Sun Oct 16, 2016 11:05 pm

It sounds like a modern-day hybrid of MARRS "Pump up the Volume" and NIN's "Only". It's got a darkish vibe which differentiates it from a lot of more typical House styles. I wasn't too sure about the gated synth. there are a couple of places where the number of steps increase and don't seem to quite fit the tempo of the piece.

Good work

winkie00 · Post by **winkie00** » Mon Oct 17, 2016 7:28 am

Thanks, think I might try a different synth sound with it today with different timings. Maybe more stabby Techno sound.

Frantz · Post by **Frantz** » Tue Oct 18, 2016 2:51 am

I liked the groove especially the bass line. I didn't have a problem with the odd timings. I thought it injected some interest and unpredictably.

I think the gated synth is too loud. I would lower that sound and boost the bass to balance out the mix.

Good job.

camsr · Post by **camsr** » Wed Oct 19, 2016 8:06 pm

Cool song. I think the high pitched squeeky thing is a bit loud, might not translate good.

winkie00 · Post by **winkie00** » Thu Oct 20, 2016 11:19 pm

Thought the same when I listened to it more and have a new version on the way. : ))

risome · Post by **risome** » Thu Oct 20, 2016 11:55 pm

A few things
Side chain the bass not for effect but to pull it out of the way of the kick and snare
The break down is too long
Less trying to be tricky with the reverse drums maybe once in the song
Introduce new elements after the drop
keep at it and have fun
Cheers

winkie00 · Post by **winkie00** » Sat Oct 22, 2016 9:59 pm

Ok, thanks for the advice peeps side chained bassline, cut break down reversed and tuned synth noise and added new noise.

https://soundcloud.com/winkie00/little-sweet-touch-alt

winkie00 · Post by **winkie00** » Sat Oct 22, 2016 10:10 pm

Just noticed my screwed up break, putting new one up.

winkie00 · Post by **winkie00** » Sat Oct 22, 2016 10:12 pm

https://soundcloud.com/winkie00/little-sweet-touch-alt

camsr · Post by **camsr** » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:18 am

This version sounds darker, I think however you are adding treble (master bus?) might need some revision, also this one is a bit less dynamic in the lowmids, idk which version I like better.

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Sun Oct 23, 2016 11:48 pm

I like the new one. As camsr already said, it's darker, and you have tidied up the gated synth so that it no longer draws attention to itself. It's a good fit now.

Good work

winkie00 · Post by **winkie00** » Mon Oct 24, 2016 7:32 pm

Thanks Guys amd Girls. I will comment on other peoples tracks tomorrow. Been working on another track.

Deep New York Trendy House : ))