Week Away - Melodic little synth tune

[redmaggott]

Short and sweet. What do you reckon?

Advice on drums welcome. Still find it really difficult in this department.
What about the mix? How would you improve it?

It's only 2 minutes long but I quite like it and would appreciate advice on what to keep, what to ditch and what I could add in order to fully flesh it out.

Thanks.

https://soundcloud.com/landslide-victory/week-away

[Allomerus]

Got some nice melodic lines in this which are enjoyable. As far as drums goes I wouldn't stop them all of a sudden but keep part of it going when it stops completely in this track. Also the song sounds playful, maybe you could use a more playful sounding kit...
All the best with it.