Last Sun

[redmaggott]

Put this together this evening.
What d'ya think?

https://soundcloud.com/landslide-victory/last-sun

[redmaggott]

Spent a bit more time on this tonight.

How about this?

https://soundcloud.com/landslide-victor ... of-the-sun

[fastlanephil]

I like what your doing although maybe it could use one or more diversions to give it more interest.

Maybe others would disagree.

[redmaggott]

I agree, phil.

This is something I need to get to grips with - expanding a tune from the initial melody idea and build on it.

Cheers.