Need some advices on the part 1

[bishopsynth]

Part 2 will feature in a non ordered list (more speed, more violence, more blood) What is your general feeling about this one? And maybe a lot of technical points to speak. I wanted a dark synth / ambient as a soundtrack

https://soundcloud.com/bishopsynth/bish ... eptor-pt-1

[davidstiles]

I think it sounds good! My one reaction to it aside from that is that I kind of wanted the repeated three-note melody in the background to pop out of the mix a little bit more than it does... but that could just be my own strange preference.