Greetings everybody!
This is an experimental song which I decided to not give away to public, just on forums in order to receive feedbacks.
https://soundcloud.com/brain-claim/embr ... ed/s-WkpCJ
Embrace The Horse Flu [Unreleased Techno]
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 245 posts since 9 Dec, 2013
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- KVRAF
- 2290 posts since 18 Oct, 2010 from Japan
I like the classic return to a proper techno genre.
The upper range on the attack of the kick is a bit too present, imo.
I do like the bass, I can feel it, but it's so very loose, it doesn't feel connected to the kick. I think if you had the kick driving the bass with some compression it would tighten up the rhythm a lot and add quite a bit more excitement.
The track also never seems to go anywhere, although I suppose that's the genre. It starts and ends the same as much as the middle and climax are just the same. Very boring.
EDIT
rewrote post after a second listen.
The upper range on the attack of the kick is a bit too present, imo.
I do like the bass, I can feel it, but it's so very loose, it doesn't feel connected to the kick. I think if you had the kick driving the bass with some compression it would tighten up the rhythm a lot and add quite a bit more excitement.
The track also never seems to go anywhere, although I suppose that's the genre. It starts and ends the same as much as the middle and climax are just the same. Very boring.
EDIT
rewrote post after a second listen.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 245 posts since 9 Dec, 2013
Thanks for Your listening! I agree with You, I didn't connect the bass and kick too much, this song was not just well done. And the excitement is really missing 
In my first album I am watching for these mistakes. I appreciate Your feedback!
In my first album I am watching for these mistakes. I appreciate Your feedback! 
