KVR Audio

V0RT3X · Post by **V0RT3X** » Tue Nov 25, 2014 7:53 pm

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ColeFromMA · Post by **ColeFromMA** » Tue Nov 25, 2014 8:19 pm

I think the production is good; it translated well for me. I like the main synth that's playing the repeated bass line, and I think the drums sound good.
I'd like a little more variety, either some vocals or some kind of lead part at some point, even if it's just for a brief period. Or maybe you could remove some elements in the middle to break things up some.

Overall a good track. It sounds kind of gritty but I like it.

XorXisT · Post by **XorXisT** » Tue Nov 25, 2014 9:04 pm

Production-wise really good.

Tension build track, really cool!

Only the repeated bassline is a little repeated too much, I think.

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Wed Nov 26, 2014 10:23 am

its a good foundation. the mix is good with the kick having a nice bite to it. as a song, it could use some key changes in the bassline or chord progression to keep interest, as others mentioned. cool

tonecrafter · Post by **tonecrafter** » Wed Nov 26, 2014 5:57 pm

I think it has enough elements, tho some are buried in the mix. The string sounds can serve as a melodic line of sorts. I'd mix it so there's more panning and the parts stand out more as they sound alternately.

Synchanter · Post by **Synchanter** » Wed Nov 26, 2014 6:30 pm

I really like your tracks, they have some unique signature to them, like your modern rhythm sensibility, tension building and use of fresh evolving sounds.
IMHO would have liked brief silences or some quieter parts before cycling the tension back up.

artificial · Post by **artificial** » Thu Nov 27, 2014 8:14 am

A very energetic track! The mix is very good, IMO. As others have also mentioned, maybe some more variation would not harm. But anyway, I really like it!