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last couple of weeks I've been working on this track. I really would appreciate some feedback from you guys! thnx already!!

https://soundcloud.com/wouter86/sinking-through

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anyone?

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Good kick, but a little booming.

Slow intro, but ok, I think.

Vocals a little muddy, I think?

From 01:54 on really good house tune. Carefully mixed :D .

Only the kick is a little over-boosted.

I'm no expert in mixing, but hope this helps :) .

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I like it man. Really mellow and deep. Love the vocal as well. Thought the mix was solid. There's a chord progression that comes in right before the breakdown early on where you never resolve back to the I chord it sounds like...could use some chord resolution there IMO, but...Also could have used a bit more sound width I thought, and there's a point later on in the song where you have a cymbal coming in on the off beat that makes it sound a bit confused cause it hasn't released out when the next cymbal comes in. A different sound there may help - like an open hat or something...outside of those things, nothing really stood out to me.

Well done.

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Do you have even more delays than I have? :P

Seriously, great tune, I like the sleepy, washed-out vocals - only the kick, especially in the first part, is a bit too prominent, it would fit better into it if pitched a tad down...

BTW, the bass line sounds great, what synth did you use for it?
Last edited by Tricky-Loops on Mon Nov 24, 2014 7:32 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Thank you all guys!! For the bassline I used the ANA synth.

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Layzer likes :tu:
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nice one. it has a long, calm intro/outro, this is almost chill like stuff. really pleasant listening, treads lightly.

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