deephouse track
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 53 posts since 26 Jan, 2009
last couple of weeks I've been working on this track. I really would appreciate some feedback from you guys! thnx already!!
https://soundcloud.com/wouter86/sinking-through
https://soundcloud.com/wouter86/sinking-through
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- KVRist
- 439 posts since 20 Jun, 2005
Good kick, but a little booming.
Slow intro, but ok, I think.
Vocals a little muddy, I think?
From 01:54 on really good house tune. Carefully mixed .
Only the kick is a little over-boosted.
I'm no expert in mixing, but hope this helps .
Slow intro, but ok, I think.
Vocals a little muddy, I think?
From 01:54 on really good house tune. Carefully mixed .
Only the kick is a little over-boosted.
I'm no expert in mixing, but hope this helps .
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- KVRian
- 702 posts since 19 Mar, 2014 from Denver, CO
I like it man. Really mellow and deep. Love the vocal as well. Thought the mix was solid. There's a chord progression that comes in right before the breakdown early on where you never resolve back to the I chord it sounds like...could use some chord resolution there IMO, but...Also could have used a bit more sound width I thought, and there's a point later on in the song where you have a cymbal coming in on the off beat that makes it sound a bit confused cause it hasn't released out when the next cymbal comes in. A different sound there may help - like an open hat or something...outside of those things, nothing really stood out to me.
Well done.
Well done.
- Banned
- 10196 posts since 12 Mar, 2012 from the Bavarian Alps to my feet and the globe around my head
Do you have even more delays than I have?
Seriously, great tune, I like the sleepy, washed-out vocals - only the kick, especially in the first part, is a bit too prominent, it would fit better into it if pitched a tad down...
BTW, the bass line sounds great, what synth did you use for it?
Seriously, great tune, I like the sleepy, washed-out vocals - only the kick, especially in the first part, is a bit too prominent, it would fit better into it if pitched a tad down...
BTW, the bass line sounds great, what synth did you use for it?
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- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
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- KVRist
- 51 posts since 11 Oct, 2014 from Budapest
nice one. it has a long, calm intro/outro, this is almost chill like stuff. really pleasant listening, treads lightly.
my latest epic/classical track: https://soundcloud.com/pal_zoltan_illes ... picfantasy