Would appreciate feedback on this Indie-Folk-House remix I did

[bedneed]

I need to know what you guys think of the way I remixed this track.
I mixed it with headphones (can't afford monitors yet) so the mixing will probably be weak, but I would appreciate any kind of advice you can give in any aspect of this song.
My remix :

https://soundcloud.com/bedneed/kings-ju ... need-remix

The original track :

https://soundcloud.com/kingsjustice/darling


Thanks.

[Tricky-Loops]

Your remix sounds a bit similar to the original, I miss some creative ideas. Instead of the "drop", I'd rather use a transition effect at this part!