Trolec - Takeoff (Work In Progress)

[trolecmusic]

Here is a track that I've been working on for a while now, trying to make it as good as I can. I was hoping that you guys could give me some feedback on the track. For example, how I could make it better. I hope you can help me, any feedback is appreciated

Here's a link to the track: https://soundcloud.com/trolecmusic/takeoff/s-cT8sv

Kind Regards,

Sam