It is far from finished but I'm posting this song anyway since I want some feedback? How is it? Any ideas on how I can improve it? Thanks.
https://soundcloud.com/laknabo/idea
Ambient, acoustic based instrumental
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 8 posts since 19 Apr, 2014
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- KVRist
- 206 posts since 16 May, 2010
hi. thanks for sharing, cool track. I mean there's things to improve, but would it get better? It is what it is...it's not very ambient or quiet at that, I like it because it has lots of different elements. Still, maybe going for a more coherent style would help. Here are a few (re)considerations: - like the squelchy sounds it starts with, maybe fade in a bit more?/piano is great/backgroundnoise works well/I think this would benefit from more realistic string samples, differentiated string programming-works later on but at times it's grating./beats were unexpected, they are nice, but it feels like you have a nice painting and keep painting on layers and layers...overdoing it in the process./noise risers at 2:20 maybe a bit too pronounced, lots of highs./ then lots of different elements, love the resonant stabs & subtle bass, but some of the synth leads don't quite fit. at the end you sound like 14 zero zero by console -which is good, but indicative of the trajectory your track has taken. it's a great soundtrackish-glitch-orchestral-electro track. my advice would be to just try and drop a few things and it might turn out better.
