i'd really appreciate some feedback on a song i made
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 36 posts since 20 Apr, 2013 from england
hi, ive made a song and would really appreciate you guys checking it out and letting me know what you think?
http://soundcloud.com/v-e-e-d/goodbye-cool-world
http://soundcloud.com/v-e-e-d/goodbye-cool-world
- KVRAF
- 2754 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK
I really enjoyed this,its a nice little track.The drums are little bit dull for my tastes but all in all great work!
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myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/
- KVRist
- 455 posts since 31 May, 2013 from Space is the Place
I like it a lot
I like the filtered synth and rhythmic amplitude modulations
I feel the track could use a third part that goes somewhere new musically. At the moment, it feels like the journey starts well, gets going, but then doesn't 'go anywhere'
I like the filtered synth and rhythmic amplitude modulations
I feel the track could use a third part that goes somewhere new musically. At the moment, it feels like the journey starts well, gets going, but then doesn't 'go anywhere'
- KVRian
- 543 posts since 16 Dec, 2003
An enjoyable tune that keeps getting better as it goes on IMO. Neat transition at :40. I found the drum programming to be quite unique and enjoyable, though you might try introducing some variation to add interest. The piece ends abruptly, so like Rah suggested you might consider another section or try to bring the end around to a more recognizable conclusion.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 36 posts since 20 Apr, 2013 from england