Original Composition - Dawn of Victory

[PatJD83]

Good day folks,


after quite some time I just finished my newest "epic" orchestral composition.
I consider it still a work in progress because I would love to get your feedback and modify the piece accordingly.
I am aware that I didnt invent the wheel in that genre again but I still hope you like it

What do you think of the sound ? ( library/samplewise )
What do you think about the composition ?

I am open to every criticism, even if you dont like it at all.
If you like it, a thumbs up on youtube would be cool

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RMASBoy-BBY

Thanks very much,
Patrick

[pzi]

Very nice work Patrick, a good listening and sounds nicely!
Some critics,
The first 2/3 is pretty nicely done, and it goes nicely all through.
Two points from me:
at 1:47 after the violins go up and cymbal finishes, the melody drops to low register while the listener might expect some higher register after the violins and cymbal.
Also the ending chord comes too abruptly for me, a bit more chords in the cadence might give it a nice ending.
The sounding is great imho.
all the best,
p.

[folderol]

Enjoyed this. Found the end a little abrupt, but otherwise fine.